Hell yeah for prose man!

I put a lot of work into Where the Mandrake Grow, so it would be absolutely amazing if any of you would do me the courtesy of reading and critiquing it.

Much love

Jerks

Any of you who know me should know that I only come out of hiding when I am in dire need of assistance.
That brings me to why I'm coming out of hiding: I am in dire need of assistance.

In my Writing Fiction class, by this friday, I have to expand a story to the length of 7 or 8 pages. I have two stories I am considering expanding to that length. I feel that I COULD do either if I really tried, but they are both posing problems.

Now, this is where you come in.
I need opinions on which to expand.

Single Occupant Housing(which is a terrible name and not the name of the story, just the working title

or

Paracelsus

Which do you like and why? Which do you not like and why? Which do you think I should expand and why? Why why why?


help...?me...?

whats that?


a new deviation?

a new work of prose?
short autobiography?!


more like short confessional.

I need your help. I need it bad. Please help me out.

Head on over to my Livejournal and read this entry:
this one!

The deadline for submissions to the Arnazella is coming up and I have yet to decide on my three short stories I'm going to send in! Thats why I would like your help!
You could read that or flip through my gallery and pick out the stories you like and let me know which you think I should submit.

I appreciate any opinions you give so please please please let me hear them! If you do not voice your opinion, what good is having a voice? Anybody that does not voice their opinion will have they vocal chords removed.


Thank you!